澳洲三年级NAPLAN写作如何评分

NAPLAN(National Assessment Program – Literacy and Numeracy)就是澳大利亚全国统考。是全澳范围内所有公校私校的3、5、7、9年级学生,必须参加的全国性统一考试。

NAPLAN考试内容 #

Naplan考试包括四项内容:

  • Language conventions语言规范(spelling拼写、grammar语法、punctuation标点符号),
  • Writing写作,
  • Reading阅读,
  • Numeracy计算能力。

一般而言,华人家庭的孩子计算能力都很好,语法Grammar、阅读reading、标点符号punctuation的成绩也都不错,但是writing写作是很多华人孩子的短板,受文化背景、父母语言水平等的限制,写作部分最难拿到outstanding,甚至不少孩子还没有达到average水平。

工欲善其事,必先利其器。要想提高孩子的写作能力,先要了解下写作考核的内容。
NAPLAN写作分为:

  • Narrative Writing(叙述文)
  • Persuasive Writing(议论文)
Narrative Writing Sample
Persuasive Writing Sample

二选一,满分为48分
Narrative就是叙述性essay,也就是记叙文,Persuasive就是辩论性的观点论文,也就是议论文,如图片所示,和雅思考试有点像。

NAPLAN写作成绩 #

Naplan的成绩单,根据band水平依次对准的分数,可以看到孩子写作考了多少分。如下图所示,Year 3的学生成绩范围是band 1-band 6。透明条形带位band6,代表学校中间60%的三年级学生的成绩范围。黑色三角形为band4,为全澳洲三年级学生的平均成绩。黑色圆点为该考生的成绩位于顶端蓝色三角,表明成绩高于Band 10,该学生处于全澳的TOP10%。NAPLAN成绩达到这个位置的学生,一般才有实力申请公校精英班和私校奖学金。

评分标准 #

这里总结了叙事性和议论文写作的评分标准,如下表所示。

叙事文评分标准 #

Marking criterionDescription of narrative writing marking criterion
AudienceThe writer’s capacity to orient, engage and affect the reader
Text structureThe organisation of narrative features including orientation, complication and resolution into an appropriate and effective text structure
IdeasThe creation, selection and crafting of ideas for a narrative
Character and settingCharacter: The portrayal and development of character
Setting: The development of a sense of place, time and atmosphere
VocabularyThe range and precision of contextually appropriate language choices
CohesionThe control of multiple threads and relationships across the text, achieved through the use of grammatical elements (referring words, text connectives, conjunctions) and lexical elements (substitutions, repetitions, word associations)
ParagraphingThe segmenting of text into paragraphs that assists the reader to negotiate the narrative
Sentence structureThe production of grammatically correct, structurally sound and meaningful sentences
PunctuationThe use of correct and appropriate punctuation to aid the reading of the text
SpellingThe accuracy of spelling and the difficulty of the words used
NAPLAN叙事文评分标准

议论文评分标准 #

Marking criterionDescription of persuasive writing marking criterion
AudienceThe writer’s capacity to orient, engage and persuade the reader
Text structureThe organisation of the structural components of a persuasive text (introduction, body and conclusion) into an appropriate and effective text structure
IdeasThe selection, relevance and elaboration of ideas for a persuasive argument
Persuasive devicesThe use of a range of persuasive devices to enhance the writer’s position and persuade the reader
VocabularyThe range and precision of contextually appropriate language choices
CohesionThe control of multiple threads and relationships across the text, achieved through the use of grammatical elements (referring words, text connectives, conjunctions) and lexical elements (substitutions, repetitions, word associations)
ParagraphingThe segmenting of text into paragraphs that assists the reader to follow the line of argument
Sentence structureThe production of grammatically correct, structurally sound and meaningful sentences
PunctuationThe use of correct and appropriate punctuation to aid the reading of the text
SpellingThe accuracy of spelling and the difficulty of the words used
NAPLAN议论文评分标准

以下是一篇School为题目的Narrative Writing的例文:

参考评分标准,这边例文的得分如下:

如何提高写作 #

很多华人家庭都很苦恼如何提高孩子的写作能力,因为写作能力是个综合能力,不是靠突击可以一蹴而就的。即使找老师辅导,也提高的有限。其实写作最根本要打好基础,写作水平较差的孩子建议从一年级开始就开始练习,比如如何make sentence structure,how to start sentence,如图片所示,这些内容在Youtube上都有视频教,可以自行去学习。写作只有打好了基础才能循序渐进渐入佳境,包括积累形容词和副词、高级词汇。

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